everyone

everyone wants to be special

like the sun

but there are so many suns

and the moon can't make up her mind.

Reviews

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. ah, beautiful ... i didn't know the moon was a woman ... yet i know ... if she had to pick one poet ... who was as special as the sun ... then she'd pick you ... brilliant title ... brilliant ode to brevity ... brilliant thought ... and brilliant rendition ...

you're everyone
i'm noone
you're someone special
i'm just trying to be a sun

[em]

- ah!!!! - there it is - the mystery of what transpires in the heavens - lies - simplified - unveiled - in your brilliant words - its observation and application - and exquisite expression - and yet again - one is left wondering - should i have known this? - well - even on the remote chance that i had known - i'm pretty sure i could never have said it like this!! - i so agree with serah - the moon - she'd pick you - no contest!!! -

her mind wanders far
a few galaxies away
looking for her star

[Sweet_pale_cacophony]

sun and moon and moon and the sun..and the lovely maze of your delicate words.

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interesting point..

[Lilly Negoi]

good point :).

[SpokenWord]

How appropriate you wrote this poem and posted it at this time. We all can't be special for what is special but to be rare, unique. Perfect poem for a perfect time.

[Dani]

If everyone wants to be special, then maybe you'd be more special by not wanting to be. Off subject, but just saying.
I really like the concept of this one.. how the moon changes every night, but suns stay the same. Everything revolves around the sun, nothing revolves around the moon. Everyone just wants attention.

[Robin]

observant astronomy ~

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

a touching metaphor~ a self contained fairy tale of mesmer within so few lines~ simply enchanting~ and oh so relatable~

[Ed Hart]

i wondered what the problem was