the wind

the wind

A Poem by paul

the wind blows secrets the air
will never tell

the wind waves sound and 
blows madness around

like leaves infected by
desire

the sun cold and the moon 
on fire

the wind pleads
in a language nobody
understands

© 2011 paul


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airy! "leaves infected by desire" is gorgeous :).

Posted 13 Years Ago


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such hidden depth to your words!! I love the juxtapositions and subtle rhymes!! nice!

Posted 13 Years Ago


I'm always aware that there is so much more than meets the eye in everything your write. I love these words, especially: the sun cold and the moon on fire.

Poetry.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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. you are the only one who understands that ...

the wind pleads
in a language nobody
understands

. so ...

i am the wind
i plead in a language
that no one understands
except you
i am the wind
beneath your wings

Posted 13 Years Ago


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