pretend

pretend

A Poem by paul

at nighttime the sky
the moon
and the sea

pretend
that they don't know me

they pretend
they pretend

© 2011 paul


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it is a fun game, sometimes

sometimes, I pretend they can't see me

Posted 13 Years Ago


Wow, so much in so few... indeed, they pretend...

Posted 13 Years Ago


A mask is on everyone's face, my friend. And you see through each one of them.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Have I ever told you how refreshing your voice is? Clean, concise images... melancholy but never saccharine. A true breath of fresh air, you are.

Posted 13 Years Ago


such lonely poems...so very lovely and lonely

Posted 13 Years Ago


Everyone simply pretends..:)

Posted 13 Years Ago



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