puddle

the puddle wants

more rain

but the dryground

deserves it

Reviews

[Isolophobe]

though there is so much to be said about desire, it all is said here. again there's a human like implication about the objects in your poetry. its subtle but undeniable. its a very f*****g impressive balancing act, i must say.

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

yes~ this is life

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Simplistic and perfect, well done, good read

[Robin]

pondering puddlefish ..