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give me

give me

A Poem by paul

give me the blue
jellybean

and i'll want the red one.

wanting one, when there's a universe 
at my feet

© 2011 paul


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perhaps you're right
in any case
this is brilliantly profound
we are a constantly
seeking species

Posted 12 Years Ago


ahem, a bit of a contridiction here but then again, maybe not.

are you spoilt for choice in this little piece. perhaps you should go to bed with none and then awake with appreciation.
or perhaps you are appreciating already.
nicely done, clever

Posted 13 Years Ago


So simple, but so perfect, this is very good :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


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your always one step ahead of the rest of us...indeed never satisfied..

Posted 13 Years Ago


After keeping up with your work for a while, I start to notice a progression after every piece as if it all follows one set storyline (or several different plots that somehow mesh together in the end). Whether that was intentional or not is irrelevant - I just think it's interesting.

Posted 13 Years Ago


oh this is good ...

Posted 13 Years Ago


And once you have the red one, you will probably want the blue one back. Spot on, as always.

Posted 13 Years Ago


:)

Posted 13 Years Ago


bull's eye, this one hits...

Posted 13 Years Ago


how curiously divine~ one step . . . .one candy pop . . . .fall up or down . . . .

Posted 13 Years Ago



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