tiny thoughts BIG SMILES

tiny thoughts BIG SMILES

A Poem by penNhand
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Love can be wonderful sometimes.

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You tip-toe through the dark

Looking for that little spark

To find that love has left a mark

A tiny heart in a piece of bark

 

Young days of kiss and chase

A blossom smile across you face

Cuddling in you favorite place

Is something time cannot erase

 

A loving gesture with every greet

Tingling sensations from head to feet

A love pilot with an amazing heat

The same sweet feeling each time you'd meet

 

So on the days you're feeling blue

Open your heart and enjoy the view

Or when you feel a good thought is due

Think of who  you lov and  who also loves you

 

*pNh*

© 2011 penNhand


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amazingly written!!! i loove it!!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lovely imagery used here. Made me smile :)
Just a few tiny typos i picked up on..
'a blossom smile across youR face'
and
'Think of who you lovE and who also loves you'
Really enjoyed reading this!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A few grammatical errors, but truly beautiful. Who can resist going back to someone or something you really, truly love?

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I took this to be memories of love, but I suppose it could very well be a present love. It has a gentle feel. Nicely written!

Posted 13 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Added on March 27, 2011
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penNhand
penNhand

Grover Beach, CA



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