this time

raw emotion

i don't know how to be

the person you seem to see

not comfortable waiting

on distant memories

could you please show me how

to be myself right now

nervous to even try

reaching inside my heart

 

because it broke and it's been years

it mended crooked and dried up my tears

there's a wall around my soul

a sign that says "keep out"

i want to be whole

but I'm filled up with doubt

 

so won't you come i'll try

my best to let you in

it's hard to let anyone see

this fear is choking me again

come and be

with me

I'll try not to push you away

this time

Author's Note

anything you want to say about it...

Reviews

[Kristin Brecoe]

aw. i felt the emotion in this piece. moving on from breakups are tough scenarios to be in. it takes a lot of bravery to keep on moving. =]

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I don't care much for numbers...it is raw, it feels real

[Pepsimax]

so sad, it ventures the peaks of sadness and emotion, well written.
1000000/10 :D

[Mike]

I really like this. It was full of emotion and I could really tell what you were feeling. Good job!