when you love someone

when you love someone

A Poem by Jerry
"

about when you love someone tell them bcs u never now what could happen

"

You might have been told that when you love somone that you should tell them. Well that doesnt always happen and the one you love could be taken away at anytime so tell them how much you love them.

 

i love you i love you

thats what he wants to say

he thinks about her and dreams about her

every single day

he looks at her

she looks back

he always thinks about

how he should react

instead he turns away

that silly old fool

because he doesnt realize

she will never go back to school

she walks home that day

she wants to lay in bed

she starts to think about him

and then gets shot in the head

the news goes around school

finally the boy hears

he goes home and crys

his eyes are full of tears

so this is why you need

to tell someone you love them

because you never know

what could happen

 

 

© 2008 Jerry


Author's Note

Jerry
i was just thinkin about this

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dude no offence but if a girl at your school wants you to tell her you love her but instead shoots herself then she has issues i dont know anyone who would do that


AGAIN THOUGH AWSOME WRITING AND IF IT WAS TRUE IM VERY SORRY FOR THIS COMMENT DONT LISTEN TO ME IM ANDREW C. LOL

Posted 11 Years Ago


OMFG!!!!!! This is soooo sad but true I guess. I loves yew Jerry!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Posted 11 Years Ago


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May
wow....was this real???? if it was then srry....but anyways, this was very emotional and deep...i got what you were saying!-believe it or not!!

i luvs yooh jerry!!

~may

Posted 11 Years Ago


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