mystery of the night

one night i was just sitting on my varandah and there was the epiphany for this right in the sky

 i stare at an eternal abyss 

of blackness , little peculiar lights twinkle 

in the vast infinite darkness.

an uncanny fog covers 

some of the little lights, blinking like a fairy light  

what is this mystery i stare at ?

it's like  a solitary abyss men are enchanted  by her beauty 

mystified by her glory 

mesmerized by its infinite dept 

its the marvel of the night  

its truly a wondrous sight  

it can be seen from any height 

anyone can see it , just venture outside , and look up high!. 

Author's Note

one should adapt the scope to read this at night it has more power then , aesthetic and general beauty can be found in everything around us we just need to open our minds to a liberal sense of beauty instead of a customized one..

Reviews

[SyberRose]

Sounds beautiful and a little eerie...SyberRose

[Peter H]

thank you :)

[SHEEMA HUQ]

very enchanting are these observations, I love the first stanza, great writing

[Peter H]

thanks bro :)

[Peter H]

yes they are observations :)

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Wow, the beauty was captured and mysteriously unleash through the stunning word play, brilliant write Brother. I enjoy this piece.

[Peter H]

thanks for your kind comment , bro you're words are always inspiring to me :)

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Welcome Bro. Keep on the loop, I believe in your pen :)