world domination

expet weidness

Dan: world domination !!!!!
Kayla: dude wrong time line screw it Daniel its not going to happen
Jenn: Quiet Kayla let him have his glory
Qiana: furby !
Niki: Noooooo !
( niki falls to knees)
Naynay : vampire
Qiana: yep
Jenn: sunrise
Niki: Jennifer I will bite you
Naynay: yep
Qiana: yep
Dan so… no world domination?
Gang: NO !!!!!!!!!!!

Mina: sounds like fun
Dan: finally some one agrees with me
(gang takes a step away from Mina and Dan)
Mina: I wasn’t talking to you Daniel
Dan: then who
Mina: to Jake on cell phone - oh I forgot my phone in the other room
Jake: Mina!-
Mina: Jake will you help me and Daniel dominate the world
Jake: o.k.
Mina: now what where going to say
Jake: never mined

Dan: yeh world domination !!!
Jenn: lets start with Japan!
Niki+mina+Kayla+Qiana+jake: Japan?
Dan: why Japan ?
Naynay: because Jenn wants to go to Japan
Niki: my little brother understands her more then I do must be a vampire thing
Jenn: even vampires understand me Niki take Keely for an example
Kiwi: whoa who ever said I was a vampire
Mina+Niki: the power of Christ compels thee
Qiana: um… Niki
( grim reaper appears )
Grim: Nikole I am your FATHER
Niki: THE JEEK !!!
ACT 2 R
Niki: I see I see ,why now ?
Grim: come of age zook over kingdom while on journey
Jenn: YOUR !
Qiana: GRAMMER !
Niki: SUCKS !
Kiwi: … yep
(mina has puppy eyes)
Dan+Mina+Jake: pwease
(Niki looks at them then back at Grim)
Niki: when
Grim: when done with world domination
Neko: I say jeek it all
Qiana: Neko just talked!
Neko: no I didn’t I mean meow
Kayla: Jenn you jeekin shiatsu
Qiana: KAYLA !

Kayla: o.k. just don’t let language hawk out she creeps me out
Qiana: Jenn have lots of babies before something happens to you
Jenn: um…no
Kiwi: am I just a shadow
Naynay+jake: join the club
Kiwi: there’s a club
Dan: o.k. we can start with Japan
Jenn: yay!
Lexie: don’t forget me
Mina: my little HATORI!
Kayla+Kiwi: CAKE
Lexie: cake, cake, cake and more cake
Qiana: Jenn Snake king
Jenn: eo lemonada and maybe some papas fritas

Grim: um… can I join the shadow club
Jake: yep welcome 

Reviews

[dw817]

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I have some news for you ... This =IS= a screenplay ! Especially the way you wrote it. It's really funny in some parts, you have one person finish another person's lines. Since this play has 2-parts, you might use a horizontal line or something to divide the two areas from each other.

To add a horizontal line, type < hr > minus the spaces I just typed. Save that. Edit it again and the horizontal line will automagically be there for you.

(BTW, -reading this some more- you're not on any medications I should know of, are you ?) :D

[phantomcristal]

huh ?

[dw817]

Well - it just seems a little - chaotic. :)

[phantomcristal]

um ...

[dw817]

You have an exciting school - I'll leave it at that. ^.^

[phantomcristal]

im easily confused

[MandaBear]

Good write up
keep it up ....

[phantomcristal]

:( i always get the same thing

[tuvi]

Good write up
keep it up ....

you have a different range of write up ...
many may ind it hard to follow ... but doesn't matter ...one doesn't need to write to please anyone ...its about projecting your mind and heart out ...

Tuvi

[phantomcristal]

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