let it go

let it go

A Poem by nigrum homonculus

It sucks when you like someone and they don't like you back but, It's not the end of the world. Don't diss the structure, i honestly wrote this in 2 minutes on my iphone.

He couldn't anticipate the precipice, the peak of feeling grief. jaw open wide and words full of knives, showering me with emotion and the notion that he will never find solace.
Get out of your head i say.
Leave the confines of your mind to your thoughts and inner child, as he dines with your demons with such innocence that it disarms the descent. Take a breath, fill your lungs, sip some water so your piss is clear. if that metaphor went through you then it ironically did its job. 

© 2018 nigrum homonculus

Author's Note

nigrum homonculus
well if you got this far, i guess you can be honest with my work? if it's rubbish let me know. I'm rusty as hell.

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Added on January 16, 2018
Last Updated on January 16, 2018
Tags: Love, crush, god i forgot how tags work.


nigrum homonculus
nigrum homonculus

london, surrey, United Kingdom

i have been away from this place for.....lord knows, something like 3-4 years? so i guess all the things i have experienced in that time have to come out somehow you know? so here we are. you're readi.. more..