CARELESS

CARELESS

A Poem by Phil Roberts

Things get broken
Hearts
Minds
It's no-one's fault
It never is
Not really
Butter fingers and distraction
Without malice or forethought
Things 
Like hearts and minds
Slip
And shatter on hard contact with reality
                                                    By Phil Roberts

© 2015 Phil Roberts


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Another great write! I can't wait to read more...

Posted 8 Years Ago


Hello, Phil. I read this and thought you should know. I hope you continue with your writing. This world needs more people willing to express their feelings. Thank you for sharing and have a wonderful day. -Matt 

Posted 8 Years Ago


Hi, Phil!
It's Richard here! : )
First, let me say, "Welcome to the site … I hope you will come to like it here as much as I do, and gain many friends and fans."

If this fine Free Verse is any example of what we can expect, I've no doubt you'll soon have a faithful following.
Your fellow-poet, Relic, recommended your poetry as the kind I would like, and he is certainly correct in that assumption … thank you, Relic!

How sad and true what you say so often is, Phil, I think it is all life makes of us that allows such to happen, and ohhh, how we learn … hopefully!

I thoroughly enjoyed the wisdom and understanding dancing upon the page in your poetic voice, and I most gracious thank you for the privilege of reading your pencraft! ⁓ Richard

(psst! "butterfingers" is a word … LOL!)

Posted 8 Years Ago


~Perfectly said. Your comparisons are top-notch. Welcome to Writers cafe. ~

Posted 8 Years Ago



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Phil Roberts
Phil Roberts

macclesfield, north-west, United Kingdom



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I'm from the north-west of England where the rain lives. I am retired and a grandfather to many. I've led an "interesting" life, i suppose you could say, with lots of laughter and a few tears, like mo.. more..

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