passion crime

somethin for my sweet sweet sweet sweetie =)

My shadow dream
alive and unseen
beneath a dark light's
vivacious gleam.

Let me hold you
in a sweet embrace
to take you in arms
and kiss your face.

my beauty
my angel
my temptress divine

my siren
my lovely
my sweet valentine

spare me one glimpse
of your brief sunshine
and I'll be blinded
by passion crime.

Author's Note

hiyaz!!!

Reviews

[Miss Shea]

It seems that I wasn't the only one who thought that the words were beautiful. :]

[Candy Cane]

wow robbie this was excellent! i think it's my favorite of yours so far. I dont know how to describe how i feel about it. it's like eating sweet cold icecream. it's delicious as i devour each word and makes me shiver. beautiful!

[Jessica M.]

A living shadow?
Sounds like something from a horror film.
Loved the theme of death in love in the poem.
Excellent write! :D

[Butterflymom]

Delightful piece! This flowed beautifully, and I found it to be quiet beautiful, original and creative. Keep up the wonderful writing.