love and heartbreak

love and heartbreak

A Poem by Sarah
"

this is a poem about someone loosing a loved one.

"

 

 

You promised you would never leave me,

You would stay by my side forever.

Now on this rainy moonlit night,

I watch you packing the car.

You place a gental kiss on my cheek,

You say you will never forget.

You say you will some day come back,

But i know that is just a lie.

Now standing on the steps in the rain and cold,

I cry wishing you would come back.

But you don't you just cary on,

You drive into the distense.

I drag myself into the house,

And close the door behind me.

I fall to the ground crying,

Blinded by love and heartbreak.

© 2012 Sarah


Author's Note

Sarah
if there are spelling mistakes please tell me and i will correct them

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A very sad poem. Few people return after they escape. Most times the person left behind. Close the door forever because of pain and sadness. No weakness in this poem. A strong ending to a excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 10 Years Ago


very sad but very beautiful. Amazing write.

Posted 10 Years Ago


so sad. but beautiful. and you said you wanted spelling corrections, so here ya go: "you drive into the distense" - "you drive into the distance."

Posted 10 Years Ago


One spelling error was " you just cary on" carry, not cary. other than that, very well, written, and beautiful! I loved it!

Posted 10 Years Ago


It made me sad reading that. Has this happned to you because I feel that there is something personal about this poem.

Posted 10 Years Ago


That was sad but beautifully written


Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on September 2, 2011
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Sarah
Sarah

United Kingdom



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I am english and am 16 years old. I was born on 13th march. I live in washington in england. I write poems, short stories. books I like: Morganville vampires Fallen twilight harry potter. Fr.. more..

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