Loves Last Chance of Thought

ok this is my very first love poem. I'm the kind of guy that just sits on the side lines while the girls pass me by. i wanted to be known by them some one that is gentle and is also strong. i do not know how to flirt but i do nice things for them. wit

How I feel cannot be allowed to show.
With your fine beauty, I only see you glow.
With a voice that would bring life to me.
But only if I could be…

How can I prove to you my love is true?
All the love I show to you, but all you do is walkthrough.
One day I wish you would finally see.
But when could this be…

Tell me why I love you so.
Is it your voice, your beauty or is it that you always have to go.
When you return, I will give you my key.
When you open my heart, you shall finally see!

Reviews

[Immortal1967]

love this...unreturned love always hurts, that shows through in this. good job

[Rainbow Rider]

"When you return, I will give you my key."
There is so much truth in this line. In order to recieve love, one must be willing to give your love first, even though that is a terrifying thing to do. Great insight in this write.