Dreary (In progress)

Poem I am currently working on.

T’was a dreary day in my world

My dreams had been callously unfurled

Dreams of days spent with you

Haunted by thoughts that I now rue

 

T’was a sad day in my head

All those dreams I now see dead

Were all those days just a waste?

Thrown away with careless haste

 

T’was a hard day without sleep

Kept awake trying not to weep

I don’t think this can get much worse

Tossed aside with a spit and a curse

 

T’was a strange day on my end

Could my heart be on the mend?

I smiled today for the first time

Without reason and without rhyme

Author's Note

Any suggestions for refinement would be appreciated. Also, a possible direction for the rest of the poem would be nice.

Reviews

[Lizbeth]

Maybe something to do with things starting to change
starting to be happy, perhaps? It has a nice message throughout, that it is moving away from being dreary, to better times ahead.
Just joined today :)

[just is]

Very nicely done, love the flow and rhyme scheme