I Don't Think of You Anymore

I don't think of you anymore.

Not your smile, or even your face.

I don't look at you anymore.

Other thoughts have taken your place.

What was once close, is now far away.

No feeling left, where once there was love.

I don't think of you anymore.

There is nothing more for me to say.

Reviews

[mandy]

I don't think of you anymore. ( but i do, i do, all the time. i just don't WANT to think of you anymore!) and that is all i have to say, except,,,good job patrick.

[AleyshaRosa]

What I always find ironic about poems like this, is you're (general public) writing a poem about how you don't think of her anymore... but technically you wouldn't be writing a poem at all if it were true you didn't think of her.
Mind boggling, isn't it?
Not to mention, after only two stanzas you said yourself that was all you had to say.
Of course I love it, Patrick.
Koodoos

[Aehr]

i can understand that feeling, i've been through it, but it wasn't like your situation or anything. This one is short, but says what it needs to say welll. So I'll say that this poem conveys your message well, and is quite interesting. When I read it, I was ike 'What must've happened?' lol.

[Amandaaa Caroline (:]

I love this! So few words, but they're so intense and powerful that you don't even realize how short this is.

"Other thoughts have taken your place."

I found that line quite ironic, because you were obviously thinking about that person web you wrote this :P hahahaha, but that's okay, you still did a beautiful job.

[KaraKay.]

Wow. So few words, that say say much.

[quinfinn]

ironic, isn't it, how we tend to write of the ones who we would prefer to believe are not even more than a memory...yet we still give them our words and our broken hearts to examine. been there so many times. i love this poem

[Mia]

The irony is that the fact you sat (stood-however you do it) and wrote this poem means you still think of said 'you'. That's kind of what I loved about this poem!

[Elizabeth]

You did quite a good job of wrapping this up in a tidy package. I appreciate writers who really economize their words. No reason to go on and on ... I imagine this was written with half a smirk. I was left feeling rather smug on your behalf after reading this piece. I know the feeling (or lack thereof) when it is just simply done. And you did a marvelous job of it.