Harmony

Harmony

A Poem by PoemsbyPatrick

The connection between us seems to be
Beyond the realm of fantasy
The energy that permeates and flows between our bodies
Is beyond the explanations of man

I feel your feelings
I sense your yearnings
I bask in your joys
I am as one with you

Trying to decipher the mystery of us
I find no earthly basis for these sublime connections
Seeking answers made of man
Leaves incomplete the understanding of our love

You feel my feelings
You sense my yearnings
You bask in my joy
You are as one with me

The answer may lie on a higher plane
The spirit connects where earthly bonds fall short
The answer of our love
May fall within the sphere of the divine

We feel our feelings
We sense our yearnings
We bask in our joys
We are as one in harmony
With each other and the world

© 2012 PoemsbyPatrick


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i like the repetition of the one stanza, i think it ties the poem together well- i like the psychologicla aspect of the poem and tend to fully understand the way the author tries to take you to another place/realm/land. i like the "I find no earthly basis for these sublime connections" line the best and feel it was a strong and powerful sentence. good work!

Posted 7 Years Ago


I enjoyed the sentiment and the artistry of the wording. However, for my taste, I would like a better poetic construct if it were meter, rhym, or form. I may have missed the pattern though. Enjoyed the read still.

Posted 7 Years Ago



Graceful and tender write.


Spiritual Connections
have you ever felt you've known someone
since before the birth of time
and that your reincarnated souls
follow the same life-line.
Sharonlee


Posted 7 Years Ago


This is just amazing. If only all lovers were connected in this way. Beautiful write :}

Posted 7 Years Ago


so many people feel that what you describe is an unattainable place. your words and conveyance of such prove those people wrong. well done!

Posted 7 Years Ago


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I think I know that feeling that you are speaking of. In the last line of the first stanza something sounds off, but I am not sure what, so you may want to give that one another look...
I absolutely love the third stanza!
Nice poem. I don't fully believe it. It just sounds like a momentary special-ness to me. But I could just be a cynical b***h.

Overall I think this a really nice poem.

Posted 7 Years Ago


PoemsbyPatrick

7 Years Ago

Ees,
Once again you challenge me, and I thank you gladly for that, knowing that it is sincere... read more
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7 Years Ago

For some reason I cannot remember the way that it was last night or morning or what ever time it was.. read more
lol first review! i rule!!!!! lol good job, interesting poem!

Posted 7 Years Ago



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Added on November 4, 2012
Last Updated on November 4, 2012
Tags: Poetry, love, harmony, spirituality

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These writings express my feelings. If you love them, I feel blessed. If they bother you, I am sorry. They are my feelings and I offer them to you as they are. While all of my writing is a glimpse .. more..

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