lets start a fire

poemsfortheweak

A lonely tiger is like a broken fighter

gimmie some sun lets get a lil brighter

russle the coals and lets start a fire

all i can be is just a junkie for hire

they just want us to call them sire

your my foot caught is barb wire

i dont think can say this any kinder

 

leave me alone with them dirty thoughts

keep me coming back like a stripper to shots

leave me alone with your global war

all i see is a world thats bored

Author's Note

tell me what ya thought plz

Reviews

[Dionysios]

Impressive rhymed verse indeed and a powerful introduction. Your finale succumbs to what might strike as a "convenient" statement: all I see is a world that's bored...
Cordially

[Dane Osborne]

This was impressive the way you used the ryhme scheme and I usually don't like ryhming poems. This was so breif and simple but you displayed so much of the absurd theatrical madness of humanity with so less. Kudos.