"Ten for you"

a simple love poem about a boy. :)

One. Karate after work.

          Two. Jimi Hendrix owns.

                    Three. Your eyes are gorgeous.

                                 Four. But your smile is better.

                                                Five. Your hands feel right in mine.

                                    Six. That cute little thing your tongue does.

      Seven. Your whispers echo in my ears, still.

           Eight. The art behind “vicious cycle.”

Nine. How beautiful you are, beneath faint morning sun.

           Ten. The number you said meant “intense.”

Reviews

[Steffi]

Really good. :D i was there when you put this up.
I like how it was informal
Something you wouldnt see as a poem when you first look at it.
Good Job!