Ink Induced Insanity

Ink Induced Insanity

A Poem by poetic-raven2012

There is ink in my veins, don't you know.
That my dearie, is what makes them blue.
That is why the lines are there.
I must get the ink out.
So I 
Take my 
HARMLESS  little  KniFe and cut the ink away.
But OH MY, my dear, the ink doesn't like me,
It wont come out creamy and blue.
Maybe I CUT  too soft,
Because the ink comes out of my arm RED.
And tsk, tsk, my dear,
You're supposed to find me ink,
And
You know how I get UPSET
When I can't write anymore.
So my dear, it's a
good thing that you made me
Not be able to write,
Because now,
I can just take your ink.
So no, no, don't pull at the ROPES my dear,
I'll only take some ink.

 

© 2009 poetic-raven2012


Author's Note

poetic-raven2012
I saw something somewhere about how writers have ink in their veins, and this just kind of popped into my head, and I just had to come write it down before I forgot, so...what do you think?

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Interesting...in a good way belive me. I like the use of color and the change in font. I like the whole meataphor thingy you got going on. I'ts just your style and that's what I llike about it! ;-) AWESOME!

Posted 14 Years Ago


Ah, yes. The ink coming out red tends to be a real problem! lol. Great write! I loved the feel of insanity. The way you made it seem justified in the mind was great. I loved this!

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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I would say this read somewhat choppy, but for the subject matter, that almost helped. It felt crazy reading it. Very nice, thanks for sharing.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Quite nutty!

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cool Beans. Now that was frightening!

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This poem is amazing! Reading it really gives me that sort of "insane" feeling... Wonderful poem.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

wow, this is really cool, its so very different, and the title drew me into it.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Funny...
You need to be cautious when cutting my veins... I guess I'm running out of ink already...


Posted 15 Years Ago


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