Momentum of Night

Circular Momentum 

Wrapped in the hush

Of feathered onyx wings

Glittered with silver orbs

As velvet silence closes in

Nocturnal calling

Of the cosmos echoes

Sending peaceful waves

Across the ether

Thundering with 

Raindrops of tranquility 

Invisible strings

Of intertwining

Connections

Lace between

Silken nurtured folds

Vastness of mystery

Spiraling in all directions

Creating momentary bliss

 

Reviews

[Jibey]

A lovely write, with you trademark linking of music of the spheres with the emotional connections of two souls that connect and fuse... the paradox of the thundering rains of tranquillity is suggestive of the satisfaction of passion...the silken folds of the beauty of love-making

[Poetic Beauty]

Thank you. I love to get abstract so you can dance within the piece

[Jetta Zippora]

Gorgeous poetic write. Very lovely, friend.

[zainul]

Very lovely work.
Small yet vast in meaning.
Still,isolating a full stanza to express my joy.
"Nocturnal calling
Of the cosmos echoes
Sending peaceful waves
Across the ether
Thundering with
Raindrops of tranquility "

[Aidz]

Nice write loved the first two lines

[Poetic Beauty]

Thank you. That means a lot coming to you.

[Poetic Justice]

beauty woven into the midnight sky..wonderful..missed your words

[Poetic Beauty]

I have missed seeing you around here too and hearing your insightful words in your poetry

[Jvl narasimharao]

There is grace and mystery in the poem.

[Revery]

Wow, beautiful write with lovely imagery and metaphors. This was delicious to read, thank you for sharing.

[Poetic Beauty]

I love the night time and all the mystery and romance that can happen within it

[Revery]

Well you captured it in such a lovely way, it matches the image you have put with it.

[Poetic Beauty]

The nocturnal hours are my favorites

[SHEEMA HUQ]

ah, very a soothing senual succsinct composition, nearly a full rhyme good use of words and well done.

[Poetic Beauty]

Than you.

[Grace Catherine C.]

Lovely, simply lovely, it had a calming effect.

[Poetic Beauty]

I find night time calming mysterious and romantic. I am pulled in and captivated by the moon and stars.

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

So magical in words and feeling!