Among the Twinkling Stars

sometimes the world falls away, as the heart beats, and love is displayed

Drift with me upon a silvery sea

The shimmers with amethyst flare

In an array of magnetic hues

 

Dance upon the silhouetting clouds

Of multiple every changing shapes

As the earth simply falls away

 

Get lost in the mystical moment

As the universe aligns two souls

Casting a spell binding love

 

A potion the emanates a glow

Of unfathomable scarlet red

That sings with the hearts tones

 

For a moment, this moment

A world of spying intruders

Are banished from entering in

 

In this magical dreamscape

The outside is vanished from sight

While we embrace each other

Among the twinkling stars

Reviews

[Veronica Chandler]

The sparkle of mandalas bright and kaleidoscopic colors are dancing in my minds eye as I read this lovely piece.
" Drift with me upon a silvery sea
The shimmers with amethyst flare
In an array of magnetic hues"
The ideas of amethyst flare punctuates this sweet piece.

[Poetic Beauty]

I like to write about the universe and drifting into magical places with that special person. I love to use color to bring about certain emotions and let the mind picture color.

[shallimarRose]

lovely... xo

[Poetic Beauty]

Thank you.

[Mauricio Montoya]

beautiful piece.

[Poetic Beauty]

Thank you.

[Ruth]

Good heavens, yes...tis official, I melted! lol Lovely! xox

[Poetic Beauty]

Thank you Poppy love has those blissful magical moments

[SHEEMA HUQ]

such enjoyable, vibrant, astonomical escapism, great writing here

[Poetic Beauty]

Thank you. I am glad you enjoyed reading this piece.

[Androglossia]

Never did I see colors as beautiful as how you described them. Your association of feelings to colors and nature brings peace to the mind before a perception. You skillfully bring your readers into your world of attractive imagery or seasons, places or phenomenon and drag them into your true point of interest. Such a work of an expert.

[Poetic Beauty]

I am glad you could emerge yourself in this poem, walking along the words experiencing them.

[Distant horizons]

Oh this is so beautiful. Now that, truly is freedom :-)

[Poetic Beauty]

When the world falls away you know its love.

[Avocations of Amber]

A sucker for anything to do with love, I had to read this. I love the imagery you've created here. "Among the twinkling stars..." ----such a simple but lovely view...

[Poetic Beauty]

Love is the greatest and most powerful emotion of all in my opinion. It creates magic and all sorts of other feelings.

[Enigma]

Your words create a very beautiful, soothing, dream-like picture for the readers. Your vision here does not appear constrained, rather expansive. Although the two souls are cut away from the "outside", there is a wide expanse for their love to fill.

Loved it. A pleasure to read. :)

[Poetic Beauty]

I have moments like this with my guy. We can be in a crowded room and sometimes it seems like it is just the two of us

[Enigma]

I have experienced such moments too. :)

[Poetic Beauty]

Those are the good times.

[Lily Mae]

I hate it when your words make me cry and short circuit my laptop lol ;) this is romance and beauty at its best...xo

[Poetic Beauty]

well I hope you weren't sitting too close when it shorted out. lol Thank you my dear.

[Lily Mae]

;)

[Poetic Beauty]

smiles