Arizona Poetry Vine

Pages upon endless pages
Filled with magical words
Poetry sprouting slowly
Growing with care over time
Blossoming into the sublime

Chapter after long chapter
Words becoming twisting ivy
Climbing skyward towards the sun
Tangling in delicate details
Trellises covered in a veil

Journal infinite journal
Swirls with eternal sentences
Flowing with rhythmic flavor
As roots sprawl out underground
Whispering amorous sounds

Stanza by romantic stanza
Spring forth with budding foliage
Arizona etched on some leaves
A silvery craving painted
By life, it’s not yet been tainted

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Fran Marie]

your words in this
lovely write bursts
forth with the love
and joy we poets
feel when writing

poetry is something
in and of itself
A rewarding effort
mana for the soul
and a blessing for
those who can write
it..and grow with it.

neat poem

[Poetic Beauty]

I’m glad you enjoy this poem. It has a calming vibe for me. There is some hidden meaning within it about someone who I have been writing about for ages it seems and he moved him to Arizona about 10 or 11 years ago. We still talk and messaged almost daily

[Coyote Poetry]

My dear friend. The poem is wonderful. Honest, strong and good thoughts shared.
"Stanza by romantic stanza
Spring forth with budding foliage
Arizona etched on some leaves
A silvery craving painted
By life, it’s not yet been tainted"
The above lines. You painted a vision for the reader. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry and your thoughts.
Coyote

[Poetic Beauty]

Thank you for your kind review. I think that stanza is my favorite as well

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome my dear friend.

[rew]

It looks good, it reads well. Mostly.
The rhyming couplets in each verse
are well worth waiting for and you've got
quite a few images here, new ones.
But, I said " it reads well mostly" mostly because
there's that clunky second verse which on it's own
is fine but it stands out like a sore thumb here
with it having only four lines, the rest five.
And unlike the others doesn't have a rhyming couplet.
This line in that verse is good
"Trellises covered in a veil "
It deserves a matching line to bring this verse in tune with the rest.
Sorry - PB - if there's a good reason for the size of that verse then, please, ignore me and carry on regardless, because, of course, this is only my opinion. I am no expert.
And, this is most important, you listen to your ear, not mine.
My very best to you
Rew x

[Poetic Beauty]

No it’s a typo I forgot to add all the lines thanks for telling me

[rew]

I guess you're not mad at me, then?
Thanks for letting me know it was a typo.
rew

[.]

I like the title. It's like a deserted life filled with love, passion, romance... And it's all in the poetry. Each page, each stanza filled up with this passion. A shiny untainted mind can write all those thing in the journal in the form of ethereal painting called poetry...

[Poetic Beauty]

I’m glad you enjoyed the poem. It is definitely filled with much love.

[.]

Yes, I did and thank you for sharing

[Poetic Beauty]

You are welcome

[Chris Shaw]

This beautiful poem reminds me of two of my greatest loves. Poetry and my garden. My garden is filled with scented flora and much of my poetry is too. I love your references to ivy and trellis, trees and roots. I confess to loving them too. Thank you PB. And as for craving, without them both in my life I would. I would have an unquenched thirst.

Chris

[Poetic Beauty]

Thank you. I’m a nature lover as well. This poem is about how much of my poetry is written about my friend in Arizona

[jacob erin-cilberto]

I just love poems about poetry...I like the idea of life not yet tainted...
Love the second stanza...Over time we write, we improve, we get tainted
but in the end, the craving becomes more than that for us...it becomes a necessity for survival.
j.

[Poetic Beauty]

I love how each person sees a poem differently. I love this thought on what this poem is about.