Symphony of Emotions

A symphony of emotions swirl
Submerged inside my beating heart
Vibrating an undiscovered soft tune
Silk ardent notes bubble with delight

They flitter with an abandon joy
Singing verses of pure devotion
Freely pulsing without restraint
Chords flowing unfettered in the blood


A melody of magnetic pull
Begins tugging at my tiny heart strings
Playing an alluring bass filled tune
That resonates throughout my whole being

Silk rapid butterfly wings flutter
Causing my spirit to come alive
A slow awakening emerges
Forming a subtle shift in dynamics

These palpitations are blossoming
Booming behind my solid rib cage
As a power ballad Carrie’s on
Filling the mind with shaking awareness

Reviews

[Amy R]

What a beautiful piece.
Showcasing how love can be quite powerful and transformative. You wrote this very beautifully..
This poem explores heavily the depths and complexity of human emotions,
particularly love and passion.

Definitely enjoyed this a lot.
-Amy

[Poetic Beauty]

Thank you so much for your kind review. I write about many different things. I tend to write what come to mind and then rearrange it until I get the wording and flow the way I want it. Love definitely feels like notes flowing through and body. Passion as well.

[Amy R]

Oh yes it feels exactly like that.
You're most welcome.

[Weeping willow]

Nicely expressed piece. The symphony of words plays a beautiful song flowing in time ;-}

[Poetic Beauty]

Those flowery emotions that flow inside even if no one else knows

[andrew mitchell]

The euphoria of these moments are all but fleeting and oh how we want this moment or moments to last and last.

[Poetic Beauty]

Those moments are hard to describe and we do wish they would last forever

[Betty Hermelee]

I love the symphony palpitating within your tiny heart; each tone has a different effect on your mood..all upbeat and enlightening…… “ a magnetic pull”….tunes emanate from your entire being….. this is a very upbeat emotional poem for you…..
Lovely
Warmly, B

[Poetic Beauty]

Smiles, thank you. It is a more upbeat and softer poem for me. Once in awhile I let my softer side take the reins; not often but this time the butterflies won.

[emmajoygreen]

'Silk rapid butterfly wings flutter
Causing my spirit to come alive
A slow awakening emerges
Forming a subtle shift in dynamics'

Of all your 'bubbling' stanzas. the one above had me smiling and nodding, Poetic Beauty. Guess emotions have this or that - according to the one emoting! You really do write with your heart.

[Poetic Beauty]

I try to write with my heart as much as possible. I’m glad you liked the above stanza. It’s a softer more delicate stanza in the mix of this poem.

[emmajoygreen]

I like everything here above but, yes that is both visual and in a way, literally uplifting. Smile

[Poetic Beauty]

I’m glad you found it uplift. Your words have brought a smile to my face!

[Thomas W Case]

Powerful emotion. Tremendous work.

[Poetic Beauty]

Thank you for reading!!

[Pete]

great description and metaphor of love. just the word 'symphony' alone speaks (or should i say plays) volumes. nice job. could also be how an orgasm feels!

[Poetic Beauty]

I’m glad you liked the use of symphony for love. Now an orgasm would be the equivalent of a lava spewing from a volcano or the pressure that forms from a waterfall at the bottom. I have many ways to describe an orgasm

[Ana Papaya]

Music and emotions compliment one another so well.
Each heightens the intensity of the other as it builds in this poem.

[Poetic Beauty]

I’m glad you liked the entwining of music and emotions

[Ken Simm.]

As you say this is orchestral and moving in equal measure.

[Poetic Beauty]

Thank you for your kind review

[Patricia]

music is poetic, with or without lyrics, we are moved to our very soul. beautiful writing.

[Poetic Beauty]

Thank you for the kind review. I love music and poetry both