A Vibration that Flutters

For everyone

This pulse beats a unique rhythm
A depth of emotion swims
It butterflies deep into its heart
Where a foreign sensation grows

A constant reminder that it’s there
While it beats a slow bass tune
Shooting out electric tremors
That penetrates each nerve calmly

Cosmic notes being absorbed
Into the organ’s muscle tissue
As it pumps gently with a vastness
That is inconceivable to the brain

Absorption is the opening key
It’s presences owned deep within
Savory sensation seeps inside
As it expands and its course flows

A flutter of wings that softly flap
A creation of vibrant colors
That enhance the newfound mental state
As acceptance slowly sinks inside

The internal battle has stilled
Sometimes it lingers in a corner
Within the recesses of the mind
Delicately it murmurs its tune

A low hum, of a love vibration
That hovers in the energy
A contentment gives natural peace
As stillness doesn’t overthink

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

This feels like me when I am writing....there is a music within but it feels like it comes from without.And it always feels foreign because I never really feel like I write any of the poems I write.
I don't feel responsible.
I really love the beginning of stanza 2.
j.

[Poetic Beauty]

Sometimes I go back and read my poems when I get them finished and I’m like where did I that come from lol i understand

[Neville]

if it were possible I would cut and paste these words to the inside of my eyelids .. but since that is not possible, I shall just keep coming back for a refill .. Neville

[Poetic Beauty]

I’m glad this poem resonates with you so much that you keep coming back to read it.

[Neville]

I love it and so much more .. N :)

[Relic]

This reminds me of the high that comes from a new love. Music only the soul knows plays inside and we hear it internally, as it lifts the spirit.

Well done, PB.

[Poetic Beauty]

Thank you. This is a relationship that isn’t conventional but has been on going for three years now. And the flutters are still alive and well

[Thomas W Case]

Very relatable. You bring this to life. Powerful writing.

[Poetic Beauty]

I am glad you found this poem relatable. I think we all have feelings deep within that we don’t always want to acknowledge their presence even though they are there fluttering.

[Amy R]

What a brilliant poem, I love the way you expressed about fighting internal battle of emotions and also the journey towards finding peace and acceptance within oneself.

This poem, was something I needed to read today like a good reminder..
"Cosmic notes being absorbed" something about this line, made me feel out of this world, loved it...

This poem has a lovely flow and gentle rhythm, mirroring the calm and peaceful state described within it.

"A flutter of wings that softly flap
A creation of vibrant colors
That enhance the newfound mental state
As acceptance slowly sinks inside"
This was my fav stanza, beautifully expressed, You really painted a perfect picture here even though it showed the journey of us having struggles.. very Good. ❤❤

-Amy

[Poetic Beauty]

We have all emotional internal struggles of accepting when we feel whether it be love, loss, sadness, heartbreak or even passion.

[Amy R]

Of course, its human nature

[Soren]

Such a physical description of the sensation of love and its excitement. Each stanza another angle expanding upon the last up to the last line that takes it to its completion of sensing not overthinking. So nicely done.

[Poetic Beauty]

Thank you kindly for your review. Sometimes we have to stop overthinking and simply feel.

[Pete]

how acceptance feels and is arrived at. not always an easy place to arrive at. nice job painting how it feels both during grappling and after.

"cosmic notes being absorbed" - out of this world.

[Poetic Beauty]

Thank you. I am partial to that look be as well

[nadia dmitri]

"A constant reminder that it’s there" Such an interesting piece about such a specific yet familiar feeling, great work :)

[Poetic Beauty]

Thank you for your kind review. It is quite different but I struggle with feeling that emotion for someone. Long story

[Jibey]

I think this is the first poem I've read about a vibrator- but somehow the busy toy comes out of it well, bringing solace and satisfaction in a dry land.

[Poetic Beauty]

It’s not about a vibrator lol 😝

[Jibey]

Ah well, maybe it had a subliminal message!

[Sami Khalil]

I can imagine the poetess absorbing cosmic energy to recharge her batteries and writing down daily notes. She is in tune with the universe and that gives her inner peace. I'm glad you are finding new mental states.
Beautifully written.

[Poetic Beauty]

At night when I write I have a calm peaceful energy

[Sami Khalil]

Wonderful. You are welcome.

[Stella Armour]

This emotional description is beautifully written PB .....

[Poetic Beauty]

Thank you for such a kind review