Vibration of Comfort

Come lay gently upon this bed
Enjoy the comfort it offers
Let silence surround with ease
Close those weary ocean eyes
Allow this quiet space give peace

Place an exhausted body
Upon a pillowy mattress
That curves exactly where it should
Giving support in achy places
Deep slumber settles; if it would

Heavy Kaiden lid flutter
As breathing begins to slow
A rhythmic pattern starts
It floats freely to the air
A true physical form of art

Allow warmth to seep within
Feminine supple thighs pressed
Close giving heated refuge
Silken moment of solace
That offers mental refuge

Velvet energy lowly hums
Purring a restful melody
That vibrates with content
A reprieve from the world’s chaos
Quietness that is wholly sent

Reviews

[Lorry]

Well I've just found out I'm not the only person who sleeps with a pillow at the small of my back (it also comes in quite handy if I'm sleeping on my side too)
But don't think I didn't see what you done there young lady! Lulling me in with talk of pillows (which I suppose is what is called pillow talk) and then getting all growed up story talk without so much as a by or leave! I'm all of a fluster young lady and not a growed'd up in sight!
It's either that or you're playing Nintendo under the covers! 😃

[Poetic Beauty]

Well this was more about being with the person that gives you comfort and not so much the grown up pillow talk

[Sami Khalil]

Hot, steamy, energetic, appealing, appeasing, rising, falling of passions in the space of bed and night time.
Rest and refuge is sought; love and laughter is caught.
When we slip under covers, love hovers.

[Poetic Beauty]

Exactly 100 percent

[Sami Khalil]

Wow! Wow!
You are welcome

[Pete]

that's some well-stuffed mattress. nothing like the comfort and refuge of our beds. a good place to unwind and mull things over. good for other activities too when the feeling calls.

[Poetic Beauty]

There is a comfort to you bedroom and space within it

[Thomas W Case]

Beautiful. You bring the reader into the scene. Powerful.

[Poetic Beauty]

Small amounts of contact with this person can create a huge amount of comfort

[Vol]

PB,
It has been too long, but your poem echoes in the emptiness...
Vol

[Poetic Beauty]

I wrote this after Mr Blue Eyes had come in work and I put his arm around me when he was standing behind me. He hugged me tight and then I was standing behind him, stood on my tip toes and laid my chin on his shoulder.

[Vol]

PB,
Oh, sigh, what I wouldn't give...
Vol

[andrew mitchell]

How the bedroom is a place of worship. Nice write.

[Poetic Beauty]

A place of play and also a place
Of rest and comfort

[Neville]

I guess the old saying is true .. you can beat an egg but you just can't beat good vibes .. regards to you and your pen and to your clearly contented internal organs .. Neville

[Poetic Beauty]

Sometimes giving the person you love/care about, a place of comfort is more important than anything.

[S.zaynab.kamoonpury]

A gorgeous poem sexy sleepy dreamy feel. Kudos!

Plz also read and comment my newest poem too

[Poetic Beauty]

I will take sexy sleepy and dreamy. All the things comfort can bring

[Trace]

This sounds like a place l would like to reside.

Very sensual and compelling poem.

Huggs Trace

[Poetic Beauty]

Thank you. It was what came to mind when writing a couple days ago

[Dylan Macadham]

such a well-versed rendering of loving&needed comfort, and sensuous too.

[Poetic Beauty]

Sometimes we all need that quiet safe space to rest and be at peace