I Love You Somewhere

The just came to me and it is fitting right now

Hidden beneath the nocturnal realm

Soaring within illusions and dreams

Floating upon midnight moonbeams

 

Sailing across the purple night sky

Whispers call out to their masters

With rapture as the spell casters

 

Bouncing between lucid dreams and thoughts

With an intimate emotional care

I love you passionately somewhere

 

Entangling deep within the soul

Wisps of magical desires do flair

Secret  splendor is sent with care

 

Woven in an enthralling dream

Twinkling with silver delight

As this feeling soars to new heights

 

Bouncing between lucid dreams and thoughts

With an intimate emotional care

I love you passionately somewhere

 

 

Night vanishes with the morning sun

Daydreams created during the day

Vividly come out to frolic and play

 

Imagination comes to life

Pictures are vivid with fiery spice

Melting away enveloping ice

 

Bouncing between lucid dreams and thoughts

With an intimate emotional care

I love you passionately somewhere

Reviews

[Tina Kline]

I love this, your words and descriptions here are very beautiful. I didn't have any trouble with how often you used the word lucid. Your poem has a very mysterious and surreal feel to it, just like a dream. Excellent poem, very beautiful. I'll say it again, I love this!

[Nathan Thompson]

Excellent structure and a descriptive sense that carries you into the purple sky. Wonderfully mythical too, great write

[BriAnna Wyble]

i adore this, its intricately written in such a way, that i could almost see the picture you painted with these words. i enjoyed this, and i cannot wait to read more of your work!

hope all is well,
-bri

[Mauricio Montoya]

I like how it comes together the words just melt in my mind because out there some where there’s that special someone,
Great job, well done.

[Tasha]

Your poem was mysterious, beautiful, and surreal at the same time. I loved it!

~ Kocholate :)

[Magdelena]

Did I already answer this?? Well who cares, I'm answering it now.. Wow! This touched me deep. Wonderful imagery. Surreal, as all of your pieces are.. I so love your writing.. it makes me feel so alive..

Hugs to ya

Mags xx

[Ecros Lathes]

it is truely a good poem.

[Denise]

very pretty poem with soft and dreamy descriptives.

[The Analog Kid]

I tend to agree with the use if "Lucid" too many times. The second stanza doesn't seem to lay right to me. I like the description well enough though. The rest flows quite good in your three-line style.

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

I love the flow of this and the way it made me feel as I read!