Heart's Melody

Floating on fluffy rose petal clouds

Wrapped in softly spun silken shrouds

With cotton candy melting delight

And heated pastel yellow sun light

 

Drifting on a merriment sea

Singing an entrancing melody

Ocean of feelings nothing but calm

Gently tracing chocolate satin palms

 

Surrounded by a velvet night

Gazing at his eyes of starlight

Intoxicated with exotic glee

A heart beats a rhythm of being free

 

Sailing down a vigorous water slide

Where two lives begin to collide

With a mystical silvery flowing date

As cupids arrow begins to create

 

 

Reviews

[I Am Svetlana]

As I read this, I could clearly envision each scene you described. Very beautiful and it's wonderful how you are able to describe things. You incorporate so much in your writing that just gives it that extra edge for me...keeps me reading and thinking. You have my full attention in each poem. I love your ideas and the way you bring it to life with the words that help bring it out.

[Tommy]

I love poetry that creates a flow in my head, and my mind is flooded the passion in this piece! Every stanza just awesome Kristina!

Great Write!
RLG,
Tommy

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a touch of romance..as light as air..and twice as sweet..lovely

[Ladysue]

Oh Kristina, this flowed so smoothly, effortlessly really...and your words and images were just delicious and magical...excellently executed...

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

You smooth romantic you... such a delightful poem... it has that giddy feel that comes with your first school crush.

[Linear]

Now thats poetry, brilliant flow and rhyme, exquisite love poetry :O)

[SpokenWord]

Oh your muse and your heart are working as one to give the most beautiful writes. This one is dreamy and has that satin cloud feel of drifting across the vastness of love. I love the dream like glare of this like we are looking at the world through the eyes of a chaild on Christmas. Beautiful write that I believe is a personal favorite :)