Lullabye

Lullabye

A Poem by Poetic Beauty

Let me sing you a lullabye

one that ease your troubles

and make you sigh

one in which the

world will fall away

as the dream state 

begins to play

Drift with me 

upon satin clouds

Where love 

is said out loud

Gaze with me 

upon the stars 

tonight

Lets journey

on a soul 

bound flight

© 2012 Poetic Beauty


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This has an awesome lyrical quality to it. One of my favorites from you for its simplicity yet it makes me want to read through it several times and plays in my head. It could be done as spoken word. I have a few that I want to record that way to post myself.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.



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I could fall asleep with these words in my ears; it's so peaceful. Lovely writing!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

So peaceful, left me in a dreamy state of mind!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

beautiful, and has a peaceful feel to it.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Such a dreamy, whimsical poem. It flows perfectly as a lullaby. Beautiful!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

beautifully written as it reads like a smooth lullaby, dreamy... I love it!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

With a few words yet so miraculously written, perfect, and to the point.

My favorite line:
" Drift with me upon satin clouds where love is said out loud "

Great work!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow, this is wonderful! So relaxing and fascinating :)))

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Peaceful and tranquil. Wonderful song and it would be a most wonderful flight. I really enjoyed this poem.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ah yes, sing away. Sing away....alot of peace in this piece. I like that very much

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Flight of illusion, where dreams travel, and the veil is so thin, and sometimes desire gets the best of us, then our words take us to the skies. Swift and flowing yet meditative, the balance of a fine illusion :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Poetic Beauty
Poetic Beauty

corn country, IL



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First off I'm on here to post my writing to have an outlet for my emotions. You will find a variety of poems. If you like take a moment and stroll through this poets mind. Secondly be kind to each .. more..

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