Lullabye

Let me sing you a lullabye

one that ease your troubles

and make you sigh

one in which the

world will fall away

as the dream state 

begins to play

Drift with me 

upon satin clouds

Where love 

is said out loud

Gaze with me 

upon the stars 

tonight

Lets journey

on a soul 

bound flight

Reviews

[The Analog Kid]

This has an awesome lyrical quality to it. One of my favorites from you for its simplicity yet it makes me want to read through it several times and plays in my head. It could be done as spoken word. I have a few that I want to record that way to post myself.

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

Soft and lovely - "Let's journey on a soul bound flight".. gorgeous.

Chloe

[Hayley]

"Drift with me
upon satin clouds
Where love
is said out loud"

Loved this part... the drifting and the satin clouds, good imagery. Where love is said out loud is very interesting because a dream state is very revealing in the subconscious.
It's very beautiful!

[roarke]

simple, perfectly balanced and supple as a lullabye. Bravo.

[Zachary_James]

This is amazing it could almost be a song, it was great....

[FireFly]

Sooooo very lyrical! Very impressed :)

[Cassie Fraga]

ooooooh **takes a deep breath** TAKE ME AWAY!!!!!
**write... write on....**

[Aianarie (INACTIVE)]

Beautiful! I loved it. 100%

[xSamilynnx]

its really good i like it alot... if you add some more to it, it would be an awesome song :D

[*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*]

Beautifully penned and peaceful write. Nicely done.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Simple and easy to read, it throughs no punches, I really enjoyed it, well done, good read.