Elemental verses

The wind quietly gossips to the tree leaves
Telling stories of its many adventures
Swirling from one tree top to the next
Conveying its stunning discoveries

The leaves flitter about with excitement
Fluttering as the cool breeze speaks freely
Rustling amongst each other with jovial talk
Of delightment in new found knowledge

The deep bass of powerful thunder rumbles
Off in the distance of the horizon
Announcing his commanding entrance, royally
A dominance that draws complete attention

Humans unknowledgible of their language
But intently listens to their dialect
Hypnotized by their enthralling sound
That rattles across the charcoal ocean sky

Nature’s lullaby for bedtime music
As the unique notes meander on
Enveloping the nocturnal sleeping hours
In an orchestra of elemental verses

Reviews

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Beauty… the sounds of Nature are reassurance that we are Safe from becoming extinct,.. when we have the Shelter of Trees and Caves where Fire can bring a sense of pleasure on cold nights. Your poetry is a Comfort to the Weary who need a Respite from the Wind. Gently, Pat

[Poetic Beauty]

I’m glad this poem is a comfort to the weary. Thank you dear Pat for such kind words.

read moreI’m glad this poem is a comfort to the weary. Thank you dear Pat for such kind words.

I love and adore the sounds of nature with its own language.

[Relic]

An excellent use of personification in this, PB. This is poetry! :)))

[Poetic Beauty]

I’m glad you read this poem and found it appealing. I believe that nature, all nature, has its own language. We as mere humans simply don’t know the vocabulary.

[Relic]

I would agree. Nature and its animals were here long before us.

[Poetic Beauty]

That they were!!

[emmajoygreen]

Word for word you capture the meaning of Nature, which has far more senses than Humankind. I can see you walking in the rain or standing to watch lightning hit distance. Do you? I'm often wrong!

'Humans unknowledgible of their language
But intently listens to their dialect
Hypnotized by their enthralling sound
That rattles across the charcoal ocean sky'

The above is superb.. close eyes, see .. feel..

Many thanks for sharing your thoughts

[Poetic Beauty]

Yes ma’am I often stand out in the rain to feel it sprinkle and glide along my skin. I will sit on my deck and watch a storm roll in and as long as the wind isn’t super strong I will sit and watch the storm outside where I can feel the electrically charged air and smell the rain hit the dirt

[emmajoygreen]

' I can feel the electrically charged air and smell the rain hit the dirt' YES! Can feel the storm a hours before it reaches, feel its unique heat-momentarily chill. I think we share the same storms!!

[Poetic Beauty]

I love storms. They are majestic and powerful

[Ken Simm.]

An enthralling mixing of nature and beauty in this season. Beautiful writing.

[Poetic Beauty]

I love the sounds of nature and the way it communicates even if I don’t understand the words

[The_Ancient_Rock]

Elemental verses, the beautiful compositions of nature.
Nature's lullaby indeed.
I like the way you describe it.
Nature is truly magnificent in all it's forms.
Great poem. Keep it up!
Take good care.
😄

[Poetic Beauty]

Thank you for your kind review. I love the sounds of nature it is marvelous and mysterious

[The_Ancient_Rock]

You are most welcome.
Yes, nature is wonderful.
😄

[willweb]

Serendipity, the sounds of nature, of an approaching storm, of rolling harmonic waves, of the ocean breeze in 3/4 time. There is a melody in all of nature and you have presented it nicely in your wonderfully warm and yes, enchanting poem.

[Poetic Beauty]

I love the sounds of nature in general

[Ana Papaya]

Enchanting verses would also be a nice title for this.
:)

[Poetic Beauty]

Thank you. I’m glad you found this poem enchanting

[Chris Shaw]

I love the chatter and whisper of tree canopies. This reminds me of sitting on the deck of our boat in summer, and just listening to the music along the river banks. Your imagery is beautiful PB. A lovely piece of writing.

Chris

[Poetic Beauty]

Thank you. I enjoy the sound of wind rustling the leave in the trees

[Neville]

So very atmospheric .. You made the whole thing come alive .. I could almost hear the rustle .. Neville

[Poetic Beauty]

Mature has its own language. For me it is calm and soothing.

[John the Baptist]

Sometimes it can seem as though nature is speaking to us through its sounds. I have no doubt that was why the ancients heard Zeus and Thor in the rolling thunder.

[Poetic Beauty]

I think nature has a language all of its own that we don’t understand