Breathtaking Revolution

Breathtaking Revolution

A Poem by Marvin Lewis Jr.

The inspiration is great during valentines day!


 Breathtaking Revolution

So intelligent GOD smiles when she speaks,

the sun appears to be dark after looking at her face,

she has more talents in her than the earth has trees,

she holds good conversation like roses in a vase.

Her words blossom every time she parts her lips,

every time she's beside me creative thoughts scream,

one whiff of her scent turns an ordinary park bench into a spaceship,

I like to gaze into her eyes for there is continual beauty like watching a dream.

The only thing I fear is a fight for its an adversary of love unlike a disagreement,

this union is too precious to me to give nonsense the opportunity to dismantle what we've built,

so I vow to speak my heart and to listen,

and before I amend your words I will search myself.

I am in love with your insecurities and your confidence,

because of  you one trillion butterflies glide in my tummy,

I know there is no heaven without dying but If I described how you make me feel to a Christian Theologian I could repaint the complexion of his philosophy

© 2009 Marvin Lewis Jr.

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Added on February 12, 2009


Marvin Lewis Jr.
Marvin Lewis Jr.

Trenton, NJ

I'm 19 y.o. and I write lyrics, prose, poetry, and treatments. I'm currently self-publishing my first book entitled "The Language Of My Imagination" which consist of poetry and prose that touch on suc.. more..