Rain & Tears

Rain & Tears

A Poem by erika
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A poem about rain and how it can relate to a very sad person.

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In some places it rains all day

The sky weeps with gray-touched

water droplets

Hands press against a window-pane

I know it’s just rain.

But it feels like more.

It feel like, maybe,

The universe understands

The sky is mimicking

The dreariness inside

Trying to carry a bit of my burden

Like the sky is crying, too. 

© 2017 erika


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Very deep and a great connection. "It feel like", should be "It feels like". Probably went by unnoticed but keep writing, can't wait to hear more.

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Added on April 19, 2017
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Tags: rain, tears, weather, sympathy, grief, sky

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