hopeless run

a poem about someone who runs away from everything going wrong in life but she dosent want to, she wants to be better,stronger but she dosen't know how.

Scream and torment

My torture hall

 

They say no run

I leap, I fall

 

No matter where

I go from here

Just a second of fear

Then Im bound

To run again

 

Not a friend

 

The comfort fades

My protection gone

 

I run for hope but,

Not for long

 

The longer that I am gone

The longer pain

Consumes my run

 

I will

But this time longer

 

How I wish

I was

Much stronger

Reviews

[Woja]

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[Aehr]

I enjoyed this. It really gives a perfect essence to the poem. I think you've done an amazing job with this one!

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

thanx Rhea im glad you liked it :-)

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This is very interesting. I love the ending ,Hannah. Good job

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

thanx