Alowe

warning: is pretty creepy and kind of ocultish like so don't like then don't read that's all I got to say

Creature in my heart

They swallow me up

Alowe, Alowe, allow me up

 

They feed on your words

They worsen to hurt

Alowe, Alowe

so, so hallow

 

They worsen the sorrow

My precious Alowe

 

And when they pretend

That they  don't see

Say they're a friend, A friend  to me

 

I won't say a word

He-he-he-he

 

But sa-a-a-a- omeday

Someday

Alowe, Alowe's

Out to play

Yay-ay-ay-ay-ay

 

Come, come out

Baby, baby

Want to play

 

Alowe, Alowe

He swallows you up

Alowe,  Alowe

 

Alowe's  had enough

ENOUGH< ENOUGH

 

Reviews

[Helena]

Very creepy indeed. The more you read and get into the 'chanty mode' the more it really does frighten one. Good imaginative gothic. Thank you for submitting this to my contest! ~ Helena

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

no problem Helena I'm glad you enjoyed it :-) thank you for your kind words its always good to hear from one that enjoys the darker things of life

[Rob Santana]

Interesting write. You have a unique style of writing. This reads like a chant to a Magickal ritual.

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

i like being unique I always say the worst thing that can happen to a person is to become ordinary :-) I did intend for this to come out like a magical chant so I'm glad it was read as such :-)

[Steven Cash]

What's Alowe?

and It was nice

I'd have liked creepier, but I"m an Urban Legend freak so that's just me

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

It's not rly anything just made it up but I picture it as a sort of demon type thing. oh and believe me if you had heard it out loud it would have freaked ya out lol

[Steven Cash]

Oh, ok :)
thanks

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

no problemo