The day she went

Nikki's fiance shane had just proposed to her that night . It was 1:50 am nikki left leving a letter for shane as her lips lightly pressed against hi she said quietly trying not to awake him this is only for your good .Leaving life behind she drove offf taking her ring off .

Author's Note

this is the prolouge

Reviews

[C.C. Covington]

Well, I'd certainly like to know why she left and where she is going. There are some spelling and grammatical errors, for example it should read more like this:

Nikki's fiance Shane had just proposed to her that night. It was 1:50 am when Nikki left, leving a letter for Shane. She pressed her lips lightly against his, then said quietly, trying not to wake him, "This is only for your good." Leaving life behind, she drove away, taking her ring off.

I never like correcting grammar when I'm reading an unfinished story because they usually say you should worry about grammar when you've got a complete manuscrip :p

But this is a perfect prologue. Its short and gets straight to the story. I'd really like to know why she left and where she is going. Good job, and good luck :)