Remember Bonky?

Remember when i was little

I would crawl into your room

and shake you awake

you would call me bonky

 

Now i'm not little

and when i walk into your room

and shake you awake

you yell, what do you want

 

Remember when I was little

and we made forts together

you would laugh and say

i love you bonky

 

Now i'm not little

and when we hang out

i get hurt and you say

don't be such a wimp

 

I was remembering this today

what happened to you

what happened to me

can't you see

I just want to be bonky again

 

 

Author's Note

i was thinking of when myy brother and i were little. thjings are really different now. wish i was little again, we didn't yell at each other as much

Reviews

[TheFemininePad]

A very cute poem that states a very good point. Things change over time, and we always want things to be easier or happier at least. Relationships with siblings can decline over time. I really like this poem a lot Julie. I think you did a great job writing this poetry.

[Krystal Nicole]

Aww. So sweet. I can relate because I have an older brother and now we dont get along as well. Sometimes I wish things would go back to the way they were. Great poem!

[Creepy Swine Guy]

I like the content of your work. This is very touching work. I wish that you would clean up the punctuation as well. It's mildly distracting to see a lack of punctuation and the lower case "i"s where they should be capitalized. Tidy this up and you will have an exquisite work.

[KAREN]

Remembering long ago is nice, you wish things could always be the way they were. Your poem is heartfelt and really sweet!

[Jesse Jacques]

brings back some memories of building forts and stuff with my sisters.

[Alexa Tasch]

Thats so adorable!!!!!!!!! im melting!!

[Grace Catherine C.]

Aww, thats so cute!

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

The message and poetry I simply love about this one. Great poem:)

[Sarah E. Pearson]

its sad, but a really great write jules. Its so true.