When I Fell in Love.....

The poem describes the feelings of a boy when he first fell in love....

When I Fell in Love

 

When I fell in love the whole world changed for me,

I became somethig I never though I'd be...

 

Life feels so beautiful now,

Even though I still don't know how,

Love changed my life & it helped me grow,

Love made me realise I'm special,

I'm no longer confused & know where to go...

 

Love changed my life forever,

It feels there's more to live & more to endeavour...

 

I feel so blessed having gotten to be with you,

The whole world changed & life seemed to be delightful & new...

 

Love made realise there's so much more to learn,

I was so wrong, Love helped me turn...

 

I promise you I'll always be there for you to love & care,

Afterall, Its only with you that this life I will share.....

Reviews

[Candle in the wind]

This is even better and more poetic the earlier one was real but too straight.
Just two things you could change "having gotten" to getting
and it should be "Love made me realise" just a typo

[Angel Bird]

This poem comes at the right time indeed. Only a few days to Valentine's Day.

Wow. Here you did a marvelous job. It reads and evokes the feeling of the writer telling these words to the reader in person. Wow. Very well written. Lovely and touching. I really like it!