Why do I still Love you..

The poem describes the feelings of a girl when she watches the one she loves with someone else...

Why do I still Love You...

 

Why do I still Love you with all my heart,

When I know you've never been there for me right from the start...

 

Its been 2 years I've been looking at you each day,

I feel I should stop, wait & talk,

But I get shy & choose to continue my walk...

 

When I close my eyes you're the only one who comes to my mind,

When I open them, you're the only one they want to find...

 

When I see You with someone else my heart starts to weep,

But you know something, you're really very sweet...

 

I wish I could be the special someone to you,

But the only problem is you don't think the way I do...

 

People often ask me why I can't be with another guy,

Oh life! instead of Being with someone else I'd rather prefer to die..

 

Why do I still Love you with all my heart,

The thought of you with someone else tears my life apart....

Reviews

[Candle in the wind]

Why do you empathise so well with a girl's emotions? It is very real

[Angel Bird]

This is a key to memory lane for me. I have lived through the same emotions a few times in my life too. Who hasn't?!
This is a beautiful writing, it's sensitive, delicate, and emotive. It has a very good rhyme and is an easy read.
My favorite line is

-When I close my eyes you're the only one who comes to my mind,
-When I open them, you're the only one they want to find...

Thumb up - great work!