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Now What?

Now What?

A Poem by pouringwater

What happened?

I used to be so creative

So many good ideas used to ripen within me

The world lay out before me

No limits

Daydreams were worthwhile because they were attainable


Now I have memories of distant daydreams

Smaller, dimmer in the distance

You can see them if you squint really hard


Television 

Coffee 

Window shopping online 

And it’s from the safety of my suburban townhouse

And I’ve earned it

I struggled and payed my dues to get here

Now what?

© 2015 pouringwater


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The unspoken statement of this piece seems to be, "I have all the things I wanted, now what am I supposed to do?"

Feel this is a very true outlook. Great expression and voice.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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9 Years Ago

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Added on February 23, 2015
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pouringwater
pouringwater

Allentown, PA



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When I was younger I used to write and it was a good catharsis. After a long hiatus I've decided to resume writing. It's therapeutic. I'm also a long-time music fan and have very eclectic taste. I.. more..

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