Little Miss Perfect

Little Miss Perfect

A Poem by pouringwater

All this time I thought she was a friend

I listened and listened and listened to her talk

Her problems

Her relationship

Her surgery

Her anxiety


Because that’s what friends do


I drove through the snow to drop off movies to her when she was sick


My threshold has been met for

Her criticism

Her challenging everything I say

Her correcting me

Her verbal jabs at my being


It’s worse when she has an audience


It’s like the dreams I’ve had where I fight

And my wrists break with the punches I throw


I cancelled a party at my house because she’d be there


I’d rather be alone and at peace

© 2015 pouringwater


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Aww... This is upsetting... To be there for a person in such a way, selflessly, a true friend and to be so thoroughly mistreated. I would have cancelled the party too... Rejecting the negativity, unwilling to allow others who do not see the gift they have to dampen ones earned peace. Giving and giving and receiving so little in return. Great write! Think many of us have had friends like these, the good and the worst. Thank you for sharing!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Aww... This is upsetting... To be there for a person in such a way, selflessly, a true friend and to be so thoroughly mistreated. I would have cancelled the party too... Rejecting the negativity, unwilling to allow others who do not see the gift they have to dampen ones earned peace. Giving and giving and receiving so little in return. Great write! Think many of us have had friends like these, the good and the worst. Thank you for sharing!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on February 23, 2015
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Tags: friendship, betrayal, depression

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pouringwater
pouringwater

Allentown, PA



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When I was younger I used to write and it was a good catharsis. After a long hiatus I've decided to resume writing. It's therapeutic. I'm also a long-time music fan and have very eclectic taste. I.. more..

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