The lonely soul

No mother
No father
No friends
No siblings
No lover
No one to talk
No one to share
No one to laugh with
No one to hold on
Just me and my self
To win the hurdles
To taste my tears
From today till my death.......

Reviews

[Sapientiam]

I'm not sure if I can give this poem an intricate review... Not because it's bad, but because it's so sorrowful that it silenced me. That is certainly loneliness at its best... Still, great job!

[prabhani]

I know its not up to the min standards of a poem even .just tried to put into words and ended up like this.btw thanks so much for your nice review.its too good for a one likethis.☺😊