two, but one in soul, you and I

two, but one in soul, you and I

A Poem by prashant harsh
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poem is about moment of happiness,inspired largely from rumi

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A moment of Happiness,
you and I sitting on the verandah(balcony),
apparently two, but one in soul, you and I.
We feel the flowing water of life here,
you and I, with the garden's beauty
and the birds singing.
The stars will be watching us,
and we will show them
what it is to be a thin crescent moon.
You and I unselfed, will be together,
indifferent to idle speculation, you and I.
"The Parrots Of Heaven Will Be Cracking Sugar
As We Laugh Together, You And I."
In one form upon this earth,
and in another form in a timeless sweet land.

© 2013 prashant harsh


Author's Note

prashant harsh
life is all about living it in your beautiful moments :)

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It really is a moment of happiness, and a piece of happiness :) Very nice, thankyou for sharing :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


this was really very beautiful.....!!!!
i especially loved the last two lines,
it was really worth reading....!!!
very well done..!!!

good luck,
saumya

Posted 10 Years Ago


prashant harsh

10 Years Ago

thnx saumya:)
Saumya

10 Years Ago

most welcome...!!!
:)
well written! i saw the picture you described :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


prashant harsh

10 Years Ago

thnx broada :)
"The stars will be watching us,
and we will show them
what it is to be a thin crescent moon."

i absolutely loved these lines! They are riddled with admiration and love for life. great job!

Posted 10 Years Ago


prashant harsh

10 Years Ago

thanx dana
It is a beautiful write up. thank you for sharing. Have you ever thought of composing songs? I think this poem will make a very beautiful song too. :) My best wishes. :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

prashant harsh

10 Years Ago

thnx foh ur lovely cmmnts,aww m dying to write a song but it seems tough ur praise will work as insp.. read more
Roopal

10 Years Ago

you are welcome, and good luck. :)
Sweet harmony here, I like that idea, very lovely my friend.

'Veranda" take out balcony, it's redundant.....

Posted 10 Years Ago


prashant harsh

10 Years Ago

thnx n i'll do edit as u suggested :)
Nicely done Prashant...yes we need to appreciate the beautiful moments in time and pay attention to the beauty of nature:)

Posted 10 Years Ago


prashant harsh

10 Years Ago

thnnx its so nice of you :)
a beautiful peice! nicely written, i enjoyed reading.

Posted 10 Years Ago


prashant harsh

10 Years Ago

thanx :)

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Added on June 11, 2013
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Tags: soul, love, moments, crescent moon

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prashant harsh
prashant harsh

jodhpur, India



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