two, but one in soul, you and I

poem is about moment of happiness,inspired largely from rumi

A moment of Happiness,
you and I sitting on the verandah(balcony),
apparently two, but one in soul, you and I.
We feel the flowing water of life here,
you and I, with the garden's beauty
and the birds singing.
The stars will be watching us,
and we will show them
what it is to be a thin crescent moon.
You and I unselfed, will be together,
indifferent to idle speculation, you and I.
"The Parrots Of Heaven Will Be Cracking Sugar
As We Laugh Together, You And I."
In one form upon this earth,
and in another form in a timeless sweet land.

Author's Note

life is all about living it in your beautiful moments :)

Reviews

[Johanna]

It really is a moment of happiness, and a piece of happiness :) Very nice, thankyou for sharing :)

[Saumya]

this was really very beautiful.....!!!!
i especially loved the last two lines,
it was really worth reading....!!!
very well done..!!!

good luck,
saumya

[prashant harsh]

thnx saumya:)

[Saumya]

most welcome...!!!
:)

[Leandro Mendez]

well written! i saw the picture you described :)

[prashant harsh]

thnx broada :)

[Dana Alsamsam]

"The stars will be watching us,
and we will show them
what it is to be a thin crescent moon."

i absolutely loved these lines! They are riddled with admiration and love for life. great job!

[prashant harsh]

thanx dana

[Roopal]

It is a beautiful write up. thank you for sharing. Have you ever thought of composing songs? I think this poem will make a very beautiful song too. :) My best wishes. :)

[prashant harsh]

thnx foh ur lovely cmmnts,aww m dying to write a song but it seems tough ur praise will work as inspiration :)

[Roopal]

you are welcome, and good luck. :)

[Frieda P]

Sweet harmony here, I like that idea, very lovely my friend.

'Veranda" take out balcony, it's redundant.....

[prashant harsh]

thnx n i'll do edit as u suggested :)

[SyberRose]

Nicely done Prashant...yes we need to appreciate the beautiful moments in time and pay attention to the beauty of nature:)

[prashant harsh]

thnnx its so nice of you :)

[chaotic katie]

a beautiful peice! nicely written, i enjoyed reading.

[prashant harsh]

thanx :)