No Love

No Love

A Poem by Pratik Mishra

I can't live without you,
I reckon you can't without me, too,
But when have my beliefs been true?
You smile at me, but I can see 
The smile doesn't crinkle by your eyes
Say, what's up with these lies?
And when we make love,
Something is missing
There is no passion, even when we are kissing.
Years ago when I proposed to you
You said Yes!
But say girl
Why do I feel like I am the only one in love?
Or has it always been one sided?
I sense, there is something you didn't tell me
Something you have hided.
Just tell me what I believe you feel,
I want to hear it from you,
And once you do so,
You are free to go!

© 2017 Pratik Mishra


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And then I remember a song "I don't care how many times you cried, it's too late to apologise, now we gotta say good bye"
Many says it's not important every question needs an answer but I don't agree..it's all upon us how we seek the answer...You may find it too at a time!
Great read😊

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Pratik Mishra

5 Years Ago

Hey Tahsin! Thanks for taking the time to appreciate to of my poems. Appreciate it.
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Thanks to you for sharing these poet😊



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I can feel this. You never know if someone feels the same way or you can never see the red flags of some one who does not feel the same way you do about them.

Posted 3 Years Ago


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And then I remember a song "I don't care how many times you cried, it's too late to apologise, now we gotta say good bye"
Many says it's not important every question needs an answer but I don't agree..it's all upon us how we seek the answer...You may find it too at a time!
Great read😊

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pratik Mishra

5 Years Ago

Hey Tahsin! Thanks for taking the time to appreciate to of my poems. Appreciate it.
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5 Years Ago

Thanks to you for sharing these poet😊
Sad. One sided love would cause a lot of pain. Very good poem though.

Posted 6 Years Ago


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I do like this poem. The poem is logical and true. Sometime we must demand a answer. I liked the flow of thoughts leading to proper ending. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 6 Years Ago


This is such a sad poem. I can feel the hurt, and the lingering doubt. You've expressed it very well.

Posted 6 Years Ago



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