---PLEASE GIVE IT A TITLE---

i need your help in giving this poem a title... it´s really hard for me to give it one, i´am accepting all your suggestions..thanx!!!:))

---PLEASE GIVE IT A TITLE---

 

 

There are many words I want to write,

About how you always made my day so bright,

If I could just have a one big pen,

I´ll write it upon every hearts of men.

 

Where can I find that unceasing care?

That you made me feel, here and there,

Calling my name in such a wonderful way,

telling me that you love me each and every day.

 

If I could just tie myself to you,

I promise, I’ll never let you go,

Because with you I’m always smiling,

I´m forgetting those bad and silly things,

The fear that I thought no one could ever cease,

But I found you and changed it into a heart of peace.

 

Thanks for being too good and too kind.

You´re really a treasure that is hard to find,

And I will always love you for both,

And keep you in my heart forever, as long as I could.

Author's Note

i´am waiting for your suggestions..:))

Reviews

[aviiar:))]

tnx everyone for your suggestions..i´m waiting for more..:))

-aviiar-

[Thea]

Hmm...Hard for me to think because it wasn't I who wrote it, haha! :)))

"My Hearts Says YOU" ???

OMG...It's so difficult! Haha! I can't think! XD

[aviiar:))]

wow..it´s super nice.,¨ YOU ECHO IN MY HEART¨..:))
thank u!

-aviiar-

[Chris]

"You Echo In My Heart" - could be a title.

[aviiar:))]

i love SIMPLY TREASURED..:))tnx thomas..GODBLESS!
but i´m still waiting..

-aviiar-

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Simply Treasured!