Music in the Air

Music in the Air

A Story by PrimeCheesecake
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Written during inspiration after remembering an event from my not-too-distant past.

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I remember a time, before I moved across the country, when I was close to my friends. We were able to go anywhere and do anything. This particular memory takes place in a place of beauty and tranquility. My best friend and I had taken time out of our adventures to relax at the local riverside park. We had bought lunch and sat on a bench and just listened.
About 20 or so feet away sat a man playing the accordion. I had never heard an accordion player play in person. I have to admit, it was the most relaxing moment that I can recall. It was if this music was the only thing holding the world together. The waves in the river moved with each note. The wind danced through the leaves. I loved life.
Love. Music.

© 2012 PrimeCheesecake


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that piece is short in words but so long in meanings. it presents how much you love peace revail the whole world, how music can calm down crulity. i liked the image you have drown with your friend eating loughing....i felt im there on another bench listening to the musician, enjoying the nice fresh air. i felt i can see the river and its waves. i just want to pay your attention to the second last line in the sentence you saying..it was if this music....i think no need for it was here. thank you for the nice writing

Posted 12 Years Ago


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lovely write , like the imagery of the water flowing to the accordion.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

that piece is short in words but so long in meanings. it presents how much you love peace revail the whole world, how music can calm down crulity. i liked the image you have drown with your friend eating loughing....i felt im there on another bench listening to the musician, enjoying the nice fresh air. i felt i can see the river and its waves. i just want to pay your attention to the second last line in the sentence you saying..it was if this music....i think no need for it was here. thank you for the nice writing

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on April 30, 2012
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PrimeCheesecake
PrimeCheesecake

Colorado Springs, CO



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