'Will remain indebted..'

'Will remain indebted..'

A Poem by Priyankaabhilaashi
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..For someone who becomes the integral part of your life through the small gestures and deeds..

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"Thanks DARLING.. 

You have been always there..in all thicks and thins..!!

You held me when i was broken..

You embraced me when i was shattered..

You motivated me when i sailed on a low note..

Thank you..

Love you..!!!!

Will remain indebted..!!!"

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© 2011 Priyankaabhilaashi


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This is a write that brings peace to ones soul. It makes you think of all the people in your life this is always there for you!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Great poem, it is always nice to have someone you can count on through good and bad times!

Posted 13 Years Ago


sometimes it just the gesture that counts and the words you have used here show so much that I cannot point out any flaws. wonderful.

Posted 13 Years Ago


A beautiful "Thank you" letter to someone loved ._.
This is sweet :)
I like how the poem flows =3
Wonderful work!

Posted 13 Years Ago


very good!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


I have many people that fit the part of the description in the poem. My Grandparent. Wise elders in my family. kind words and gift of love are appreciated sometime too late.A wise person give his thanks to the people that gave without desire of payment. In life. A very strong ending to a outstanding poem.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Priyankaabhilaashi
Priyankaabhilaashi

Jaipur, India



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A traveller by choice..A writer by soul..!!!! A freelance writer..A Doctorate..A Management Graduate..!!!!! Born and brought up in Jaipur, The Pink City. You may read me here also: http://enri.. more..

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