A SILENT GOODBYE..

itz a sort of conversation between two spirits....when a person is not ready to accept the fact that he is dead what happenzzzz...read along..

ME: why m i being dragged off
where are you taking me
set me free, let me go
my love is waiting for me

SOUND: stop your breath, close your eyes

noone is there waiting for you
wake up from the dream, watch yourself

and find out who are you..!!

ME: oh! who i'am and where i am??
my sound crackd out loud

SOUND: set yourself inside the little grave,
you are not allowd to move out

ME: hey! where did you bring me????
why is it so stifling here??

SOUND: you are nomore a part of living world..
just lie down..close your eyes

 you can rest in peace over here

ME: no!! just let me go
my love wouldn't sleep without my night rhyms

SOUND: huh! she has learned to sleep, learned to smile alone
it's been long time

ME: hey! how much time has passed by,and why have i been sleeping for so long?

SOUND: it's been several decades from dusk to dawn
you are at peace,at rest after a long imprisonment of being used upon.

ME: HUH! you old perilous man
watch my love walking towards me.. ♥♥

SOUND: you are a life away from her,it happens each day to me!!
look at the tears rolling down,the shivering steps moving slow.
who says inside the grave you live happily..i know how hard it is to see your love falling low.

ME to my LOVE: heY!! y are you so down,y did you cry???
there was nothing i could hear else then my love screaming out in tears.... Y DID YOU DIE..??

AND BY THE LAST I GOTTA REALIZE....

it was A SILENT GOODBYE..!!..♥

Reviews

[Canicus]

I like, dissapointment, and sadness, yet hope this poem mixed these emotions well. good job keep it up

[TheElfPrincess]

I like how this is a story within the poem. It had much emotions within it. Well done.

[Black]

keep it up
i like it,
though dont caps so much
it takes away the emotion
make the person frustrated by words, not by layout
:)
but further good job!

[Tasha]

I liked this a lot. I really liked how you made it into a conversation between you and the sound. I liked the last conversation the best. Keep it up.
♥ Ta'Shandra