Excuses And Lies

My First Poem

Excuses And Lies Hurts My Heart And Breaks My Mind, So Lets Forget This Part And Go Back In Time, Being Straight Would Be Great, Life Would Be Good, Just Like It Should, Lets Get Off The Train Of Pain And End This Game, All Your Do Is Stare And Pretend Your Care, Im Something You Cant Repair, Once Im Gone Im Gone, So Lets Get Along, It Wont Take Long, It Seems Like Your Not Listening, So Now Im Dissing, Now You Have Fears And Tears, Every time I Try, It Just Makes You Cry, Now Excuses And Lies Hurts Your Heart And Breaks Your Mind, I Told You To Forget That Part And Go Back In Time, But You Dont Listen And Now Your Dissin, You Dont See, That Your Just Like Me, Its Like I Said, Once Im Gone Im Gone, But I Guess You Dont Care, So Your Saying Its Not Fair, You Should Of Listened, Do You See What Your Missin, Your The Best Thing I Could Ask For, And i Want Nothing More, I Want Us To Last, So Lets Forget The Past, Excuses And Lies Hurts Our Hearts And Breaks Our Minds, Lets Forget That Part And Go Back In Time.

Author's Note

First Poem So Go Easy On Me

Reviews

[Practically Enchanted]

Ok, I will go easy, b/c it is a good poem. It flows like a song. It really reminded me of music. I like your style! It is different but in a good way. Watch your "yous" as they keep appearing as your, which I don't think was your intent. Keep writing, I like!